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0Dev_Das0Lv112yr
2022-01-24 09:54

Okay I was actually curious about this work because it said “dark” in hash tags, and I’m all in for it. Leafed through several chapters and got absorbed into the story and how well written it was. From grammar to punctuation to dialogues to characters - all seems enthralling. I’d recommend people to give this one a try, as it is author’s first work outside of their genre. I think it’s brilliant 🔥🔥🔥🔥

Wonder Warriors- a fight against time and crime

RoseP_17
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RoseP_17
RoseP_17Author

Thank you so much for your kind words! Again I am just at a short of words! Thank you for reading as well as leaving this delightful review! So glad that a fantabulous author, like you, liked this work of mine q(≧▽≦q)

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RoseP_17
RoseP_17Author

Hey there! It's your author here! Who is being shameless enough to review on her own book! 🤫🤭 Anyways, jokes apart. Its great to see you visiting my book here! And thanks a bunch for that.😘 This is my first time writing such a genre, as my main theme from the start had always been Romance. So I am trying a new one😤 which I hope you all will like too! If possible please leave a review right here! So that I'll be able to know how this work of mine is and which areas I might need to improve in the future. You know what, just write what ever comes to your mind about my book. Does not have to be something good, infact if you do write something bad I'll not really see it as something bad but rather I'd see it as a chance to improve so that I can grow~😊 (☞ﾟヮﾟ)☞So just leave a review here!☜(ﾟヮﾟ☜) That will help me improve my writing. I'll be looking forward to reading them then! Take care~

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The_Procrastinator
The_ProcrastinatorLv4

Reveal spoiler

2yr
Rubaiya_Jasin_khan
Rubaiya_Jasin_khanLv1

Your writing quality is as perfect as anything else I just adore it and the story development is beyond amazing and the character designs are just mind blowing and your novel is just fantastic and magical.

3yr
Tundee
TundeeLv2

The plot is really interesting and intriguing. Totally worth reading if you are willing to give it a chance. The characters are well written and are interesting to watch.

2yr
Auzyko
AuzykoLv3

The plot is interesting. The characters are well written. I would recommend it to anyone who like this kind of novel. Totally worth reading.

2yr
Sandipan_Dutta_7440
Sandipan_Dutta_7440Lv1

this thriller story is really good going I would love to be a reader of your story the plot is really great and the characters are also very good to keep up.....

2yr
BlueSapphire_dust
BlueSapphire_dustLv3

The story seems good, but for me, because it was tagged as dark and thriller, the story should be more detailed. How you write the story needs an improvement but I believe once you did it, the story will be better.

2yr
Fuhuaxi
FuhuaxiLv10

Okay. First thing, the synopsis was kind of dull in some way. The first chapter looks a prologue for me. To be honest, the first chapter has a lotsa questions on it. Yeah, totally look prologue. But the world's name is kind of cute. The structure of the sentence needs improvement. And since is crime-thriller genre, the detailing must be precise. I haven't read all of the chapters but so far, it's... anyway, you'll do good.

2yr
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