This to me feels like a trash novel were the writer just has a dart boad and uses it for ideas. The problems include warped powers so the mc can get anything they want borders wishfullment with the only thing stoping me say that is it is Harry as the mc and not some random named mc for the writer to project on. Then you have more then three worlds in one mha, harry potter, one punch, fma, and more that results in conflicting systems, rules, laws, or what ever name for a fiction's logic unless you look back to first problem so you get a why does it do that because but why shuu it just does problem. Then I have problems with the nerf of his stone which seems to be done to give him a reason to learn martial arts and why because there cool but because there cool. The mc also has a sleep or knock out based jack sperow compass that takes him to what he wants points more at that first problem. The worst part of it and the reason I even made a review is that I feel hurt by the writer stoping the old and better version for this junk I understand the writer has the right to do what they want but I also have the right as a reader to make any form of review I want some seem to forget that and think they can only be positve.
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