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Review Detail of _Jo1Jo2Jo3Kurdi_ in Marvel: Mr. President [COMPLETE]

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Writing: OK with little mistakes (4star) Story development: It is good but some things would be better if it was different in my opinion sind the development is little to slow for me.(3stars) Character Design: OK but would be little better (4star) update stability: Don't know am still new and not at latest chapter so thats why a neutral good 4 star. World Background: Well its Marvel with little changes so 4 stars (Am about chapter 45) Overall Currently REVIEW: 3.8

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Marvel: Mr. President [COMPLETE]

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Mhhh well I find that if the story development was little faster and less time wasted in war. Just like how Mc did see the world as more like a game then actually a world where innocent people to live and die. Although he did release this fact in chapter 43-44 but I still find it annoying how he did not take anything serious. So -1star for the slow progress and -1 star for Mc being not serious. Well even if my argument is not good for some it does not change the fact that the development is a 3 star in my mind. Well I give it maybe another Review after chapter 100