Review Detail of FlowerOfEternity in Marvel: Mr. President [COMPLETE]

The last time I posted a review on one of your stories was on Grandpa Universe...So hi 👋 😃 Anyway, here's my rating for the first 28 chapters so far (Coming from a Flower whose first language is not English, so don't hate on my grammar.): WQ: ⭐⭐⭐⭐ As always, it is top-notch. There are some exceptions to this, but in no way do they distract- or make the story unreadable. SoU: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ 28 chapters in one day?! I'd give it 10/5...Bad jokes aside, based on the update schedule of MisterImmortal's previous stories, I can only assume this one will be the same. 1-2 chapters a day. SD: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ At the start, it was a bit rushed, but that is mostly because of a massive information dump happening in the early chapters to build Hector's background. After the first 4-6 chapters, it will slow down a bit. CD: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ As always, MisterImmortal manages to pull off a very likeable main character. Personally, I love when the MC is an old man/woman. I feel it adds a sort of mystery and uniqueness. Besides that, Hector has been shown to be absolutely ruthless to his enemies, but loving to those he views as family. (I am looking at you Moony...and Satan 😉) Furthermore, he uses his knowledge to his advantage, planning ahead for the future. WB: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ It is marvel. What could go wrong? I know it is an AU, but that is exactly right up my alley. Concerning the changes Hector has made - I can only say that I enjoy them 😃. This is the first time I have seen a fanfiction with an MC being REALLY involved in politics. Usually, they just use their knowledge about the future to invest and become multi-billionaires and not much more. Furthermore, MisterImmortal has clearly (to the extent of my knowledge) done his research concerning WW2. Total score: 4.8 PS: Can't spoil much in the review. If you want to know what changes Hector has made and how it affects the MCU, please read it yourself. I promise you (most likely) won't regret it. Thanks for taking the time to read through my review/rant. I hope you have a nice day 😅.