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2024-06-23 14:03

I’m not going to fully rate yet but I am a bit confused as of the early flow in the story. There are some repeated parts/panels and some plot holes that aren’t fully addressed that makes it a bit hard for me to continue. This might just be me but I would like some back story on how the contract came to be and what the terms are. (Although I do realize this might be addressed later in the story, it’s just confusing at the beginning and hard to follow) Also the feelings between the two characters aren’t fully addressed, but it seems like Su Mu excessively cares for the Ning Ye (sorry if I misspelled his name and I’m going to call him president from now on) but this isn’t really shown so it just seems a little out of place. Also, I know they state that the returning actor was Su Mu’s past boyfriend in the summary, but it feels like it was just a close friendship from what I’ve seen just with the underlying tension but not yet an official relationship. The previous reviews give me a lot of hope that this comic will improve especially after the misunderstandings in the beginning, but I have already seen our entitled president have three one-sided misunderstandings with no communication, solely expecting the worst of Su Mu’s character and not harboring any trust in him. He also exhibits jealousy which I can only attribute to guarding a possession as no emotional connection is shown to have been built between the two characters and Su Mu always seems to be treated harshly with reproach and distrust. I’m personally routing for the second male lead, but the first male lead is always the one that comes out on top so yup. The art is nice and Su Mu is really adorable! I’m just a bit confused by the story at this point :)

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