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NoWoRRyMaN
NoWoRRyMaNAuthor3yr
2021-10-30 02:15

When I first reviewed this novel in the first chapter, I had no idea what to say. But now that this book has won gold in WPC 220, hopefully, I can answer some questions. The first thing I want to ensure is the quality of the work. I have two years of writing experience, so don't worry about bad grammar or robotic character interactions. MC is neither evil nor kind. He is stuck in a VR game with thousands of players, but his priority is to get out of the game. MC is a novice in VR games (this is literally his first time playing one), but that doesn't mean he will be a total noob. He has professionally trained in swordfights, martial arts, and many more things. The main goal is to survive, Romance and Harem. At first, I wasn't sure whether I should add romance or not, but a novel without romance is like coffee/tea without sugar; some like it, while some don't. So the romance will be a sub-plot here. As for the harem, I will add it as a subplot too. His goal is to survive and beat the game, not to collect girls. There is also cultivation, but it is also a subplot. And Zach's (MC) cultivation is unique that allows him to cultivate infinite MP. I have also added illustrations of places and characters in the paragraph comments (if you see a blue one, click on it) for reference. I can't think of any more questions. Feel free to ask here, I will reply to them all!

Gods' Impact Online

NoWoRRyMaN
4.7
462 Chs

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ShinigamiX19
ShinigamiX19Lv13

Discord?

3yr
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NoWoRRyMaN
NoWoRRyMaNAuthor

I am revamping my server. Once it's done, I will post discord link 👍

ShinigamiX19:Discord?
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sonjihu
sonjihuLv1

Just cancel the harem, I like Aurora. Please please please don't do harem. You can have other potential love interests but don't explicitly state that they are and just mainly focus on Aurora lol. There's too much going on to be juggling a bunch of girls anyway (from a writing and reading perspective). It's not that I necessarily dislike harems, it's just that you already got it right with the first girl. No need for more haha... Please 😢

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NoWoRRyMaN
NoWoRRyMaNAuthor

I am more than confident in my harem execution skills. I am saying this based on my other novels, which had harems. Anyway, as I stated in my review, harem is a subplot here. The story will be focused on the plot, but there will be romance here and there, maybe some steamy and juicy moments too, if needed. Also, there will be a small harem, so don't worry.

sonjihu:Just cancel the harem, I like Aurora. Please please please don't do harem. You can have other potential love interests but don't explicitly state that they are and just mainly focus on Aurora lol. There's too much going on to be juggling a bunch of girls anyway (from a writing and reading perspective). It's not that I necessarily dislike harems, it's just that you already got it right with the first girl. No need for more haha... Please 😢
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ShinigamiX19
ShinigamiX19Lv13

No worries Man. .. 😁 I'll be waiting. .. meanwhile have some 🍵

NoWoRRyMaN:I am revamping my server. Once it's done, I will post discord link 👍
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Lazy_Chicken_God
Lazy_Chicken_GodLv13

Can you make a extra chapter that describes all the different classes and their base skills.

3yr
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Lazy_Chicken_God
Lazy_Chicken_GodLv13

A auxiliary chapter

Lazy_Chicken_God:Can you make a extra chapter that describes all the different classes and their base skills.
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NoWoRRyMaN
NoWoRRyMaNAuthor

I will do it on my discord server. Make sure to join!

Lazy_Chicken_God:Can you make a extra chapter that describes all the different classes and their base skills.
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Dao_Of_Patience
Dao_Of_PatienceLv14

Harem...*sighs* the one bane to all human who hates it😭😭

3yr
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NoWoRRyMaN
NoWoRRyMaNAuthor

Come on, You are exaggerating!

Dao_Of_Patience:Harem...*sighs* the one bane to all human who hates it😭😭
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Immortal3258
Immortal3258Lv3

Mmmmm

ShinigamiX19:Discord?
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Reddd
RedddLv11

I never really cared whether or not a story was harem or not but always seeing u incels cry about it in the comments is ridiculous

Dao_Of_Patience:Harem...*sighs* the one bane to all human who hates it😭😭
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Dao_Of_Patience
Dao_Of_PatienceLv14

Reddd:I never really cared whether or not a story was harem or not but always seeing u incels cry about it in the comments is ridiculous
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MAIDENLESS
MAIDENLESSLv1

Is the mc op?

2yr
NoWoRRyMaN
NoWoRRyMaNAuthor

Is MC op, you ask? Well, he is a god.

MAIDENLESS:Is the mc op?
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Claracomoelsol
ClaracomoelsolLv15

Yes, harems are not cheating but you can understand why people wouldn’t like it if they grew up in a different environment and mindset. Harems are part of relion and culture in real life, and so is monogamy as well as other practices. Everyone is allowed to have their own opinions, taste and preference.

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Alemax08
Alemax08Lv14

is the MC able to get immortality in the real world too ? it would be disappointing if he is just OP in VR but in the real world will die after 80 years 😒 am not a fan of MC's that will die of old age. I love happy FOREVER endings 👌😎

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NoWoRRyMaN
NoWoRRyMaNAuthor

Just read the first few chapters and you will get your answer.

Alemax08:is the MC able to get immortality in the real world too ? it would be disappointing if he is just OP in VR but in the real world will die after 80 years 😒 am not a fan of MC's that will die of old age. I love happy FOREVER endings 👌😎
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Cinque_39
Cinque_39Lv11

I'll leave this on 69 likes.

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Alemax08
Alemax08Lv14

ok 👌

NoWoRRyMaN:Just read the first few chapters and you will get your answer.
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I got asked at chapter 134 to make a review and this is my review. Writing quality great. Story development is also great but it seems like you forgot the shop girl who is the only woman who got his mother's "acknowledgement". Character design is great except for the Mc's friends from the real world who I personally don’t want in the story. His harem and family is enough. The Mc is also to weak without his glove wich is the only thing I dislike about him. Current updating stability is 2 chapters every day and that is absolutely great. World background is interesting but Zach has said that he traveled to other realms with his father and he should have been able to train qi/mana there. The game is interesting but the lower floors are boring and you know it. You even made him go into a sea realm to make it a little bit more interesting.

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