Writing Quality: In writing we all have flaws. As I further read it, in my opinion it seems fast but maybe because I am into a slow pace style of story. Well, it ain't necessary though Fast paced is more effective than slow pace. Story Development: The progress of the pyramid is going smooth but since it is just starting I can not tell all of it just yet. Character Design: Well build, easy to read the growth of the characters. Updating Stability: Yes, I can notice that the author of this book always update their story. World Background: I can see it but still a little blurry, just keep updating! the unseen will be seen!
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