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FitoLv52yrFito

well the writing is not bad, there is no panther goddess or super teachers, the reading is interesting and easy to follow, but it lacks an animal companion maybe an eagle or a raven, it is still not explained how its powers work it is a warg, Greenseer, valyrian?

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I see u've read the previous version. The tavern crew was too OP. It's hard to place them in the original world without changing the story. The shadowcat was from Valyrian court mage lineage. It was valyrian magic. Animal companion, maybe later when mc home is all settled.

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