Over all good novel, but I have a few issue with this fic. The MC doesn't feel like a living human since his personality is what his current position is and that fact keep getting mentioned as if to remind the reader about it, that's just a machine which made it impossible to sympathize with him. The author mentioned that that fact will be explained but to get to that point it's still very annoying. Secondly the lore, it's appreciated that the author put so much effort into it but it's too much. Frankly the only thing I care about are MC power and how it work, as for the lore behind it and the lore if the gods that power was usurped from, I don't really care, I think it's a waste of space and skip most of it, other might like it thou.
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I see. Ok, I will see into it and edit that part.
Thank you for letting me know. Your review was much appreciated.
Ok, so i edited the ch 23 that held that problem. Pls let me know if any other part has some problem, I can try to well fix (I cannot promise but I can definitely try) it without affecting the later part.
Thank you for your hard work. TBH reading latter chapters, I can understand the MC point of view and the way he act, after all everyone will also act different in case they have difference position but most of the time their core personality still stay the same. In the MC case I think his change is a bit too extreme? it's like he's a complete difference person that's why I said he doesn't like a living human and since he's from To aru, I think he's like the angel over there that have their action dictated by logical logic like a machine, maybe you could worked it differently? Or don't keep mention that point too much? it's just my opinion thou.
LoreTemple:Ok, so i edited the ch 23 that held that problem. Pls let me know if any other part has some problem, I can try to well fix (I cannot promise but I can definitely try) it without affecting the later part.
