Review Detail of Ifyld in Tribe: I Become Invincible With My 10,000x Bonus From The Start

It is very cliche and the mc gets op wayyyyyy to fast, from all the paragraph comments I have seen the main problem people don't like this is because THE AUTHOR/TRANSLATOR CAN'T DO SIMPLE MATH, if they change the title to "random big buff bonus" it would be ok but when you 10,000 just to make the number bigger it will backfire because readers are expecting for a x10000 number not just whatever numbers that suit the item, it needs to be consistent. Also add more men troops, there are too many women, there has too be diversity and the "romance" type thing going on with Lillian is not working just make it a kingdom building no romance, if you want to do romance make it better right now it is Cringy. Last thing the plot armour on the Mc is so big and too convenient meaning. Hope this helps