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DKtheDaoist
DKtheDaoistLv112yr
2021-12-19 14:00

I'll be honest it's okay, just okay, however if you are someone who usually reads stories about reincarnation into the past then this story will not make sense to you, I mean the major thing about being born into the past is the information on how to proceed with the present, however in this novel the mc knows little to nothing about the past it's as if it was not his life at all, firstly unless he contributed to a major butterfly effect that caused a huge effect on the events that are to happen of which he did not then this means that the author of this novel is not knowledgeable with things pertaining to time travel, I mean the mc should know the events that are happening around him because he has already experienced them however he does not which means his life has changed, how, what happened that caused this major inconsistency with the the timeline? I mean will start with his first case, he says he heard about it in his previous life that means it was originally not assigned to him, what changed that made him get this new case? We are not shown anything in this story, inconsistency 1. Secondly, he does not know his teammates which means he was not assigned to this team previous or the teammates from the past changed, what exactly is happening here? I mean not unless the mc altered the timeline knowingly which should have been revealed to the readers then the time paradox in this story does not make sense at all. All the events are killing the idea that the mc time traveled which in turn will have a major butterfly effect. The butterfly effect should not have come before even the mc altered the course of time. As such for me who picked up because of the time travel reason, I am completely disappointed in this novel.

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symonp05
symonp05Lv15

This is similar to my opinion. I think he spent weeks for a case so he should remember at least the major details. But he behavours as a total rookie. Except of course the aura...Like in all chinese novel the MC possess a aura which can supress the counterpart

shv_luffy98
shv_luffy98Lv5

so if I'm reading the novel I'll have to take the world to be an alternate world kinda like in wbma.. so there's surely no finding out how he died or ig I can just take it as the system selectively removing all the memory related to the cases to train up the skills of mc.. Dang maybe I should be the author of this novel

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