Review Detail of M2skMan in HP: The Secret Heir.
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The novel is very well written and didn't saw any incorect words or grammar, The story develop fast but in a good way. All I want to say is just read it and you won't regret.
HP: The Secret Heir.
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AlphonseDarkshield:I mean you might claim it doesn’t have grammatical issues but I already see some in the Synopsis and your review itself. But I’ll still give it a shot. ✌️🙄
M2skMan:from Philippines from my perspective it doesn't have any grammatical correction.
To be honest with you the idea itself seems good, but the execution is lacking. I couldn't finish the first chapter, there are grammatical errors every two lines and let's not talk about the weird turns of phrases that are everywhere. A Grammarly quick-check would have been more than needed.
M2skMan:from Philippines from my perspective it doesn't have any grammatical correction.
AlphonseDarkshield:I mean you might claim it doesn’t have grammatical issues but I already see some in the Synopsis and your review itself. But I’ll still give it a shot. ✌️🙄
Nah, as the op said, he is not exactly from a place where English is the native language so it’s not unexpected for them to miss somethings as they themselves don’t necessarily see them as mistakes or realize them as such…
TheFlagGuy:if he didn't saw any errors their must not be very many
AlphonseDarkshield:Nah, as the op said, he is not exactly from a place where English is the native language so it’s not unexpected for them to miss somethings as they themselves don’t necessarily see them as mistakes or realize them as such…
even if it's from your perspective that doesn't mean it doesn't have grammatical errors. it certainly does have them
M2skMan:from Philippines from my perspective it doesn't have any grammatical correction.
urwin25:even if it's from your perspective that doesn't mean it doesn't have grammatical errors. it certainly does have them
They're simply trying to help you improve the accuracy of your perspective. A teaching moment for you, but it's up to you if you want to acknowledge the facts and improve or ignore it.
M2skMan:not saying it doesn't. I'm just saying from my 'perspective' but yeah who's asking anyways?
acknowledged it. Not saying it I didn't just pointing it out that its for my perspective. Anyway got a sick and need to recover see ya.
Haylizzle:They're simply trying to help you improve the accuracy of your perspective. A teaching moment for you, but it's up to you if you want to acknowledge the facts and improve or ignore it.