Review Detail of Blackpaint in THE ABANDONED ALPHA'S SLAVE MATE

Good story. The flow of the story is good, characters are decently made and the current chapters showed everything that needed to be known in the story. There are minor typos and writing needs more polishing but it didn't distract me from reading. I would suggest to fix the formatting of the paragraphs. I personally don't mind, but I've seen readers who do so maybe try to work on that😄