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Here are my honest thoughts about this story based on what I read so far and I am sorry if it's quite harsh: World-Building: I do really appreciate the author explaining the lore of the world especially about the pixie and human war with the werewolf. Which is interesting in my opinion and quite unique for a werewolf type of story. However, there are flaws which are sometimes the telling or the infodump quite too much and the way to reduce it is shows more the environment such as describe the place in quite detail or places. Characters: Adam and Emma are quite fun characters so far especially with their funny banter and they interaction is very decent in my taste. They personality are quite distinct from one another too and I believe the author can give a good development for them. For the direction is quite clear for now which is they trying to escape for the humans or the enemies who hunt them and I cant wait for more discovery about the world from their perspective. I also like the protagonists are from the so-called bad guy side and it can be interesting to unveil the truth of the world and the story Overall, it's quite interesting Werewolf book and finally it's not fully focus on the romance. Therefore, keep up the good work and hopefully will be on the top!!!

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Thank you so much. I'll work on my places' description and world building more. I am glad you liked the twins and I'll do my best in overcoming the development' flaws of my book.