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I'm back, thanks for making such an interesting work. Gosh I missed so much, I'll read it for you. Back to collecting other books, wkwkwkwkwkwk.....

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The book needs editing. There are so many grammatical errors and pronoun inconsistencies. Even some phrases are getting repeated multiple times. The female lead was so adamant not to talk to her first husband and gave him so many woes and was trying to be a strong independent character but could not stand her ground with her second husband. An all powerful moon goodess whohas the ability to choose and alter her fate resigned herself to the situation and was so helpless to the second husband. It is both ironic, inconsistent and laughable. The other had the time to write abou their past did not give ample time to develop the story.

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