Review Detail of Karmarhein in droppped4

This is TLM but with a One Piece skin over it, it doesn't even add anything new, it just changes some words so they fit One Piece better like Mechanic-> Swordsman, there are also copied paragraphs and sentences that DO NOT make sense in One Piece at all. Cool idea? Sure, but it's not made properly, instead of taking TLM as an example and inspiration to make something unique and intetesting it just...does this. 5 chapters was my limit.