Its an amazing story with some simple flaws. The setting is similar to ”The Legendary Mechanic” but in a cultivation world. Mc is a npc in a world where players are soon joining. Spoilers ahead: The first flaw in the book is the time discrepancy. The cultivation world and earth have a 5:1 time ratio, yet mc somehow uses a store you can use once every month twice in less than 10 days. Similarly, when one of the players are brought up they are always shown to be streaming without taking into account the time difference between worlds. Finally some glaring huge problem is the fact that mc never tries to study his occupations: Poison Maker and Alchemy. One of the mc villain skills lets him get sort of an aura the more death he has on his hands wether directly or indirectly, and making poison and selling them is an easy way to get a huge body count, but it’s not even considered.
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thanks for the review, I'll be sure to work on your findings
Thanks for the hard work, and good luck with your future headaches
