webnovel
I_LIKE_SWORDS
I_LIKE_SWORDSLv41yr
2023-05-25 23:29

I think that the Grammar needs more improvement, and the story feels like it's rushed you should explain the story a bit more.

Honkai Impact 3rd///Transmigrate to the world of Honkai

GOGOLIGO
4.3
8 Chs

Liked it!

LIKE
empty img

No replies. Be the first!

Other Reviews
_Shiromi_
_Shiromi_Lv11

so this is rewrite fanfic I guess so it still good to be honest keep a good work Author ๐Ÿ˜‰.Take care yourself and I'm want reading this fanfic until the story end so please don't drop.

3yr

Katarin
KatarinLv12

Okay i guess i am the first reviewer after the novel change place. The first thing i just want to say is Good Job on the Novel but i need more!!!!

3yr
D_Faiq_Fahmi
D_Faiq_FahmiLv1

[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

3yr
HellPhoenix
HellPhoenixLv5

Where are you author-san ๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค” When will be the next chapter release ๐Ÿ˜‚ I need MOOAARRRRR ๐Ÿฎ๐Ÿฎ๐Ÿฎ ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

3yr
Golden_Harambae
Golden_HarambaeLv13

Words cannot describe how happy I was when I found a honkai fanfic, there are definitely others somewhere but this was the first I found one. It's very interesting so far and long chapters are always a plus. Aside from some spelling and grammar errors, it's great.

3yr
Superxbro
SuperxbroLv15

sooo I'm guessing this has been dropped?

1yr
MCF490
MCF490Lv4

Long time no see Author-san. I noticed that you come back to writing again after atleast a year gone without single news back then. I'm happy that you back and sad because you're not informing us on the past book for your come back. I hope you will continue to writing for long time before you gone again. Welcome back to fantasy land, Author-san

1yr
Nepsoul_Deadly
Nepsoul_DeadlyLv1

Hmm needs improvement on grammars also story too rushed, if the story is fully explained in more properly I would have been more immerse with the story.

2yr
Melusinee
MelusineeLv3

good fanfic but update when good fanfic but update when good fanfic but update when good fanfic but update when good fanfic but update when good fanfic but update when good fanfic but update when good fanfic but update when good fanfic but update when good fanfic but update when good fanfic but update when

3yr
Related Stories

Creating Happiness with Heart in Honkai

After Transmigrating into another universe and becoming Haxxor Bunny, she came to Honkai Impact 3rd world. In order to wait for the Astral Train that will lead to the universe that has many Aeons, Bronie decided to make games that will bring people smiles to their faces. Miss Pink Elf: "When can this cutie make more touching games like "Undertale"~" Metal Gear Bronya: "Next time, I will definitely beat you in this fighting game "Guilty Gear" damn it!" Man who hops In-and-out of the coffin: "The game "Civilization" made me feel the weight of civilization and the meaning of our world, but I must delete this game otherwise my company will drag me down because of me. I cant pay off the debt without finishing the manuscript." 'Polite' man with blazing fists: "Please, dont make games like "Undertale" and "Getting Over it with Haxxor Bunny" again!!!!" Seeing this nostalgic and familiar comments, Haxxor Bunny could only smile and say one thing; "Haxxor Bunny can hack not only the world but also people's hearts!!! Bronie will use games to quietly hack into other peoples lives!!!" -XXXXX- Not suprsing I'm showing this not going to lie. Same with the first one, this fic also has good pacing and heart warming story as well as comedy and its an instant recommend for every Honkai Enthusiaths. Disclaimer: I aint own anything, and a mere 'translator' or 'editor' to show gems. Used translator: Google MTL and Me. Original CN name: ๅ†™ไฝœ้ฃŸ็‰ฉ่ฏปไฝœ่ฟชๅฅฅๅ“’

Bismarck_Imperia ยท Video Games
4.9
137 Chs

Honkai Star Rail: Developing Mobile Games on Xianzhou

Lin Yu finds himself transported to the world of Honkai: Star Rail. Equipped with a divine mobile game development system, his first project is creating "Honkai: Star Rail." Soon, his game captures the attention of the entire universe. As players reach the Cocolia boss battle, the song 'Wildfire' begins playing. "Woah?! This is a turn-based game; how dare you make it so intense!" "The moment this music kicked in, I felt like I was about to take down an Aeon!" Progressing further, they encounter Dan Heng's sea-parting scene. "I thought 'Wildfire' was intense enough, but there's even more fire here!" "Dan Heng, still denying you're Imbibitor Lunae? Now you're a five-star limited character!" Arriving at Penacony: "Huh? Have you listened to 'WHITE NIGHT'?" "Acheron's power has been tested - fellow gamers, feel free to pull for her!" "Duke Inferno: Children, this isn't funny." "Before experiencing the story: Aventurine? Just another profit-driven fraud! After the storyline: May the Mother Goddess thrice close her eyes upon thee..." "What Aventurine?! He's clearly my unfortunate yet loyal bro!" *** Please support me on Patreon, where you can read a bunch of extra chapters, not just for this novel, but for all the novels I'm translating. I upload at least 2 times daily for each novel (meaning there are at least twice as many chapters on Patreon compared to here on Webnovel). https://www.pat reon.com/ThatGreatStuff

ThatGoodStuff ยท Video Games
Not enough ratings
107 Chs

Genshin Impact: I spread the Pokemon to Teyvat

Hu Tao: "My Gible, also known as 'Fifty Million Mora', is the first pseudo-legendary Pokรฉmon in Teyvat!" Lumine : "Pikachu you are my first partner, let's go adventure together" Ningguang: "I heard that training Champion-level Pokรฉmon requires a huge investment of resources and a lot of money? Sorry, things that money can solve are not trivial at all... I've just acquired the first Mega Evolution Key Stone in all of Teyvat! Metagross, Mega Evolve!" Zhongli: "The contract between humans and Pokรฉmon is very interesting. It is not one of master and servant, but of partnership and symbiosis." "Furthermore, even without my witnessing it as the God of Contracts, this bond is very strong, unshakable, and incredible!" Raiden Ei: "Celebi." "The mythical Pokรฉmon that can travel through time and space..." "If I find it, will I be able to go back five hundred years and save my sister Makoto, Kitsune Saiguu, and the others during the Khaenri'ah Cataclysm?" Takumi traveled to Teyvat and became the store manager of the Pokรฉmon House. Before he knew it, he was respected as the father of Pokรฉmon!

ahan5000 ยท Video Games
4.5
172 Chs

Arcane: Champion Witness System

"Oh! So you're asking who I am?" "That's a good question, my friend!" He stood before her, spat out the yellow sand from his mouth, raised both hands shoulder-high, and proudly proclaimed, "I am a big shot in Zaun's Undercity, the ninth councilor of Piltover. I am the honored hero of Bilgewater." "What have I done?" "I once set fire to the Petricite Grove in Demacia and competed in height with the Yordles in Bandle City." "..." Standing in front of her, he spoke confidently. "And now, I've encountered you in the swirling sands of Shurima." "Alright, lady, I've said my piece. Could you please put away your weapon now?" ////This is a translation, I do not own this story or any character in it. The original author is [ๅญๆข“ๆœจ] ZiXingMu and the link to this book is https://www.69shuba.com/book/39724.htm Gonna update 1 or 2 chapters a day cuz I got another book I'm translating.////

TypicalFicEnjoyer6 ยท Video Games
4.8
360 Chs

Persona: The Phantom Masquerade.

After making a bet with the owner of the Velvet Room. The God of Control decides to cheat by changing the soul of the Trickster who is supposed to defeat him. Placing another soul into the protagonist of Persona 5 Royal. Follow Ren Amamiya, the impostor, as he slowly begins to spread his influence. All in an act to bring entertainment to those who are watching his actions. And maybe, in order to do something more, hiding his actions in plain sight to those who observe him. With the assistance of his persona, Tartuffe. he will be able to see through the masks that humanity wears. Gaining a deeper insight into those around him. ~Now, onto the part where the author talks about the story~ To those familiar with Persona 5, my goal for this story is to create a new version of what happens in the game rather than basically rewrite everything. That includes the way the confidants develop, as well as the way the story progresses. For those unfamiliar, I also try to explain everything in a way that you will be able to follow along even if you have never played Persona 5, though I highly recommend the game to anyone who hasn't played or watched a playthrough of it. Yes, it will have the harem and the R18 in the future. However, unlike novels that are 90% lemon, and he gets the girls two chapters after meeting them, the story and romance will progress at an actually reasonable pace. So, the relationships with each person will develop naturally as they do in the game. Lastly, I want to talk about the three pillars of this story, which are the confidants, the Metaverse, and the mix of both. For the last one, I mean chapters in which one of the confidants is developed while also learning more about the Metaverse and the mystery surrounding it. Throughout the story, I will try to weave the three of them as best as I can in order to capture the appeal of the game. Anyways, that's it. Hopefully, you all enjoy the story. --- --- --- Also, I opened a discord https://discord.gg/WTgN9J3YgK. Pretty barebones at the moment cuz it's brand new. But feel free to drop by.

BonVoyage ยท Video Games
4.8
123 Chs
Login