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xavier_101
xavier_101Author2yrxavier_101

Another shameless author here! This is my first attempt at making an original novel, I hope it works out and you like it, I plan on keeping the Plot simple until I get used to making original novels, I hope you like it.

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Tale Of The Dragon God

xavier_101

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HazeUniverse_1
HazeUniverse_1Lv2HazeUniverse_1

hey author story is nice and love it but try writing in different manner don't star with "" in some paragraph and try using first letter capital One in certain places it will be more presentable in reading I am supporting with power stones keep it up ☺

Deux_Asura
Deux_AsuraLv4Deux_Asura

Is this a harem?

xavier_101
xavier_101Authorxavier_101

I cannot tell you as it would be considered a spoiler. kekekeke

Deux_Asura:Is this a harem?
xavier_101
xavier_101Authorxavier_101

thank you for your support.

HazeUniverse_1:hey author story is nice and love it but try writing in different manner don't star with "" in some paragraph and try using first letter capital One in certain places it will be more presentable in reading I am supporting with power stones keep it up ☺
Cheese_curdles
Cheese_curdlesLv4Cheese_curdles

So then all tags are spoilers because harem is a tag. Was gonna check it out but I didn't like this response bye

xavier_101:I cannot tell you as it would be considered a spoiler. kekekeke