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Requiem_Soul
Requiem_SoulLv102yr
2022-01-01 20:11

The first red flag you should know in this story is he get a child in his early journey with gender bend luffy, next he treat his girls like dirt and toys and Author will justify this on the latest chapter where his own goddess lover manipulated him and his se*ual skills, also his first child is also because the goddess manipulated him. And Author do all this because of ? Because he wanted to delete the se*ual skills. now all his girls realised and wanted to leave his crew and no matter how i look at it, Author cant correct this flow of story except rewinding time but that itself make the story stupid af. With this latest development author has not only successfully ruined his own story but made quite alot of readers having bad days. If you cant make a harem novel dont make a harem and ruined the story.

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Daolord777
Daolord777Lv12

Dafuq r you on about where did you read the crew wanting to leave ?

Requiem_Soul
Requiem_SoulLv10

Author changed it lol. Before this ,it was all over the place now author remake the chapter due to how many outrage readers. And you’re the type of reader who didn’t read AN eh?

Daolord777:Dafuq r you on about where did you read the crew wanting to leave ?
Lobsang99
Lobsang99Lv2

I left him for that too brother

Requiem_Soul:Author changed it lol. Before this ,it was all over the place now author remake the chapter due to how many outrage readers. And you’re the type of reader who didn’t read AN eh?
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CharonCR
CharonCRLv12

I'm gonna shamelessly ask what is AN?

Requiem_Soul:Author changed it lol. Before this ,it was all over the place now author remake the chapter due to how many outrage readers. And you’re the type of reader who didn’t read AN eh?
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Requiem_Soul
Requiem_SoulLv10

(Author’s note)

CharonCR:I'm gonna shamelessly ask what is AN?
CharonCR
CharonCRLv12

Thanks.

Requiem_Soul:(Author’s note)
abcdefghi987654321
abcdefghi987654321Lv3

What chapter?

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