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2022-02-27 19:56

I really enjoyed reading. It's got a heavy dose of comedy and I really appreciate that, several times I burst out laughing and couldn't stop for several long seconds. Writing Quality 5/5 Quality is very good. Although it's a translation, it's very easy to read and the translator even takes the time to tweak things here and there to make it easier and much better/funnier for us english readers. Stability of Updates 4/5 Updates every 2 days from what Ive seen. Story Development 5/5 Pacing is done very well. Chapters are a decent size and it doesn't linger on events for too long while also detailing each event properly for maximum enjoyment. Character Design 4/5 The names of each person are easy to remember and it's also simply to figure out each person's "role" in the story. One of them is a vet Dark Souls player, one of them is a master cook, one of them is a chuuni, and so on. World Background 4/5 The author doesn't touch on world background all that much, only bringing up details when it's important and when it pops up in the story. It's not overwhelming but it's enough to make sense of things and understand stuff. All in all, I highly suggest giving it a read. This story truely deserves a 5 star, but I try to make it a habit to make accurate reviews, therefore it's only 4.4 stars :(

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What is the stability of updates 4/5? If its every 2 days on a consistent basis then it should be 5/5. Stability doesn't mean how frequent the updates are but if the lengths between each update is consistent. For example, if an novel uploaded a chapter 6 months ago, then 4 months ago then 3 weeks ago and then takes 4 months to upload the next chapter then that'll be 1/5 because it isn't consistent at all.

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CIiff_Hanger:What is the stability of updates 4/5? If its every 2 days on a consistent basis then it should be 5/5. Stability doesn't mean how frequent the updates are but if the lengths between each update is consistent. For example, if an novel uploaded a chapter 6 months ago, then 4 months ago then 3 weeks ago and then takes 4 months to upload the next chapter then that'll be 1/5 because it isn't consistent at all.
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