It's too random it hurts my head. The reviews are sus, they are probably alt accounts. People said this was similar to another fanfiction so the author probably took a fanfiction and changed it a little.

The start of the first few chapters is a good one. I hope the author keeps it up and does not drop it. Its already 5 stars for me for being a Honkai fanfic and a chatgroup

what the hek is going on with this fanfic?? The randomness is so cancerous that it started to hurt my brain. I tried putting my brain on auto mode and tried to go more than 10 chapters but i failed. Suddenly gaining powers, suddenly practicing in dojo makes u cut a building, suddenly we know that he is part of an organization, suddenly he already had emiya's power. This novel seems to be written by a child suffering from adhd.

Everything was good and all, but the world was a bit confusing. Nevertheless, it's still a good story, and by Chapter 15, it became really exciting. I found myself eagerly waiting for the new chapters to be released. This is my first time writing a review about a novel, so forgive me if it's not perfect.

Gonna be honest. This feels like a fever dream. I really have no clue what’s going on, but still I’m going to read it lol.

[img=update][img=recommend][img=coins][img=update]

Great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍

I like it don't really care if you do🥇🥇🥇🥇🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜👍🤜🤜🤜🥇⭐🥇⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍🤜🥇🤜🥇🤜🥇🤜👍⭐🥇🤜🥇⭐👍🤜🥇⭐👍🤜🥇⭐👍🤜🥇⭐👍🤜🥇⭐🥇🤜👍🤜🥇

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Writing style is good easy to understand. Story was written well and only some part wasn't explained well. The story was developing properly but the relationship was not due to forbidden technique the time skip