This looks very good! There are little to no grammatical mistakes. The author posts twice a day which is incredible. The main character has a domineering personality. If you like that kind of MC, this is for you. Characters are good and the world seems to be well-designed. Overall, I think this has great potential. Definitely a worthy read for those who like domineering MC's.
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