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The words used to describe the world and the events that take in place in it are wonderful and filled with so much fantastical whim. I really liked how much time you used to describe the city of festivities, however, I did find that many of the things that used to describe are repeated several times but are just phrased differently and could do with a trim of the excess.

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Ancient God in the Modern World

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thank you, I will keep that in mind.