A pretty darn entertaining concept, no glaring grammar faults tho people can always strive to be better over time in how they word and construct sentences. Anyway, I'm not here to break apart every sentence, the story is fun and lighthearted, I even chuckled a bit during the opening chapter. If you want something fun then give this one a shot ^-^
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