Review Detail of Harleeyah24 in Otherworldly Desires

I love the plot so far! Only a few chapters in and I’m already hooked! I also love your use of words, although some adjectives seem to be used either incorrectly or insufficiently. It’s okay though, you can always edit and correct mistakes when you reread. I’d also love to know a bit about Yuna’s previous life and about who she was before she reincarnated but I’m most excited to find out where this new life leads her to, though it seems to be off to a rocky start already. Overall, pretty good story with an intriguing plot!