Review Detail of BurningOcean in Yandere Story :- Secret Magical Lovers

The only good thing this book has is steady updates, and a fast paced story, I highly advise the author of this novel to put some thought into writing before publishing. The grammar is terrible and the chapters are ridiculously short, there is already 15 chapters out with one of them being the author explaining the main character's backwards thought process. Look I am not trying to be mean here, but try to refine your craft before you publish. I see great potential here for this type of story the possibilities are endless; and I see that you passion for this work you have done, it is just disappointing that the full potential isn't being taken advantage of. So my advice is to keep a consistent word count, improve on grammar, and plan out what you want to happen for the story.