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The story is really good. But the author pays too much attention to the description of what is not necessary. For example, a description of non-original characters that we all already know (their appearance, clothes, mood, facial expression, and so on). The same applies to the description of the area. It would be better if more attention was focused on the plot, rather than describing what we can see just by searching the Internet. This also applies to the author's second work. (written with the help of a translator)

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