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BrilliantDream
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Some useful information. #1 English is not even close to my main language, so don't expect good grammar, just something readable. #2 This fanfic, it's just something to pass the time, so I don't expect anything at the level of paid writers. #3 If you did not like the fanfic, just remove from your library. #4 Yes, the protagonist is not how you want him to be, and if you're feeling bad, write your own fanfic.

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crimson666devil
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can you explain the MCs personality? and whos the main love interest ( thought it was grayfia because she's in the cover )

Michael_TQ
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I have hopes that it is just as good as Gilgamesh in DxD I can only tell you that it is better on the subject of information dump.

FoodReviewSnake
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The sypnosis reeks of a wuxia mc so I'm out.

AwokenShawn
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FoodReviewSnake:The sypnosis reeks of a wuxia mc so I'm out.
Ballad
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It's not bad as long as it doesn't turn into some dumb Bashing fic

KING_IN_YELLOW
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i ask

AwokenShawn:
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Ballad:It's not bad as long as it doesn't turn into some dumb Bashing fic
AwokenShawn
AwokenShawnLv12AwokenShawn

*proceeds to beat up* Nothing see here folks move along

ShadowFlamePhoenix
ShadowFlamePhoenixLv13ShadowFlamePhoenix

The irony in the Books name and the synopsis is great lol

SORCERERSUPREME_7
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Is mc award user??

funmaxwell
funmaxwellLv13funmaxwell

I see a lot of authors make the same excuse English is not my first language so don't complain about the grammar. so what we can't complain at all?? what if it's completely unreadable??????? I'm starting to feel like they use it as a license to get away with bad grammar and so they don't have to put any effort in becoming better writers in English. which I think is counterproductive. as I always thought the point of writing these fanfics in another language was to become better at it and in order to become better you need to be criticized and have people point out what you did wrong in a constructive manner. if your first language is truly not English you should be asking people to point out grammar errors and point out how you could have phrased your wording better. honestly it breaks my heart when I find a fanfic with an amazing story premise but I can't read it because the author's first language is not English and the grammar so bad it's unreadable and he won't take criticism about his grammar or actively try to fix it.

qion
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fcktard

LUCIFER_otsutsuki
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Esta muy bueno me gusta mas el protagonista dark

Cai_Lin137
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Cant you next a chapter this page?

killersoul
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he didn't say don't complain he simply said not to expect much which means he's simply aware that he is likely to mess up and because of such decided it was beat to warn us of such

funmaxwell:I see a lot of authors make the same excuse English is not my first language so don't complain about the grammar. so what we can't complain at all?? what if it's completely unreadable??????? I'm starting to feel like they use it as a license to get away with bad grammar and so they don't have to put any effort in becoming better writers in English. which I think is counterproductive. as I always thought the point of writing these fanfics in another language was to become better at it and in order to become better you need to be criticized and have people point out what you did wrong in a constructive manner. if your first language is truly not English you should be asking people to point out grammar errors and point out how you could have phrased your wording better. honestly it breaks my heart when I find a fanfic with an amazing story premise but I can't read it because the author's first language is not English and the grammar so bad it's unreadable and he won't take criticism about his grammar or actively try to fix it.
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