Review Detail of NoShot in Chaos Cycle: The Eye of Genesis

It's an interesting story as far as I went, but I can't continue reading it, the grammar and syntax are killing me. It takes all the joy away from me and ruins the immersion in it. It's like I can understand the story while at the same time can't and it ticks me off. If author gets a proof reader or improves later on, I will come back, probably..