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Dr. Henry is really brave. I mean, I don't understand why any scientist would want to open a portal to another world or dimension especially considering the fact that we don't know what dangers lie on the other side😩 Your writing quality is really good as there's barely a lot of mistakes so good job on that aspect .Either way the story has great potential and I hope that you'll continue being passionate about it .[img=recommend]

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