The concept of the story is overall interesting. The title of the story also enables us to visualise what we expect to happen as we know what to expect. I find it interesting in how she meets the mysterious man and asks him straight up whether he was a kidnapper. Hahahah! Who would say otherwise? There were amusing moments in the story which made me burst out into laughter. I could also feel the second hand embarrassment from the character. * * * * * * * * * * * However, the synopsis of the story was lacking. There were multiple grammatical errors and the punctuations were all over the place. I would assume English isn't your first language but overall it is a good plot. Don't get discouraged, instead use this advice and improve your writing. I can see you are a diamond in the rough and look forward to your growth.
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