At first it was good and interesting, but then it started repeating the same thing. the characters are good and the plot is good as well. but it is very disappointing to pay for 5 chapters that repeat the same conversation over and over. Another thing that is disappointing is the fake emotions from the ML and his lack of understanding. I understand that it could be considered the build up for whatever climax, but there is no point in dragging it out for over 30 chapters. I fine the progression of the story to be unsatisfying and a wast of coins.
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Well said. The story plots is often dragged too long just for a scene that I am often impatient reading it because it takes several days just to finish a scene about confrontation between FL with her enemies
I agree the story is just being dragged out unnecessarily. It's just one vindictive move after another by the FL sister. we get I she's horrible. why not just finish her once and for all. the repetition of her wickedness is tiring
