Review Detail of Biscuit_willieon in In Marvel, let's see how it goes

I love the plot and the story you are getting too. But in my own personal opinion the background indicator to development. It's kind of stiff to be honest we all focus on the MC but no other mentions of the other pother paws of point of view's of views of the other Marvel characters. And by that being said I have a little bit itching is to say Is the story going too fast the main fanfiction of your story not focusing enough on the details of the story and making the beginning a little confusing because of the details you gave what the story began above. In simple terms the main character does not have a main goal. The plot is confusing because we only see the main character's point of view not others like bodusa or Lucia or The Avengers about something growing in simple terms doesn't have that much detail detail or anything about the emotions of the characters happening in their own world and that is wanted to tell you about it. So yeah that's what I wanted to say to you for why English toy much more better yeah.