5S for writing quality. Congratulations, you can use words and punctuations! 3S for stability of updates. The chapter release is honestly too slow for the story development pace. 4S for story development. It has potential but the only gripe is how the story went from a good place, to shit hitting the fan, a minor lull, hitting a small peak and finally just becoming a stand still. 3S for character design. This is due to the character interactions feeling pretty generic and almost two dimensional/one sided. World background gets a 5 since I have not seen anyone slap a uchiha blacksmith, a descendant of the blacksmith who made the mist's 7 swords. Overall evaluation is that the story is good but definitely needs improvement in some areas like character interactions and story pacing in correlation to the low rate of chapters being released.
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