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2021-09-23 14:49

The story started in a messed up way; The 1st couple of chapters had a mashed-up paragraph in which you would get confused by who is speaking. For the people who don't want many changes in the Canon, the Author introduces God's, changes the fact that the Basilisk is the strongest snake and makes it so that there is a stronger one which has something to do with God's? Anways the story is very messy and hard to read because of the writing.

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