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LordShivaStories
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2023-07-28 18:42

Overall it's a great novel. Plus points are it's great descriptive writing and the personality of the characters. Even the evil character William kind of feels real since he has faced a dark past. This novel is emotional roller coaster with sadness and rage laced in it. I want to see more pls continue author

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Art1111
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Thanks for the honest review! ^^ Gosh I feel so happy even though it's one review. I'm gonna try my best adding chapters in the future!

LordShivaStories
LordShivaStoriesLv3

welcome, also you can try to create your own review swap threads in web novel forum continuously since this story deserves recognition since it's not garbage like some famous novel. Otherwise just spam this story in review threads of other people

Art1111:Thanks for the honest review! ^^ Gosh I feel so happy even though it's one review. I'm gonna try my best adding chapters in the future!
Desolate_Abyss
Desolate_AbyssLv2

please can you teach me how to provide perfectly describe like you do.I'm am author too, and really bad at descriptions. Already looked at other books but none is as good at description as This.So can you teach me pleaseeeee

Art1111:Thanks for the honest review! ^^ Gosh I feel so happy even though it's one review. I'm gonna try my best adding chapters in the future!
Romance_guy
Romance_guyLv14

Romance?

Art1111:Thanks for the honest review! ^^ Gosh I feel so happy even though it's one review. I'm gonna try my best adding chapters in the future!
Romance_guy
Romance_guyLv14

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