Review Detail of Prince_nonchalant in Ecto-Yaksh

Firstly, not a bad story. I can assure you that most readers will be invested in the story once the author continues to place effort into it. Synopsis: Not bad. Provided the necessary information about what the story is about. That's all that's truly needed. Writing Quality: Honestly, this is where the book falls for me. There are many run-on sentences, a few missing punctuation marks, and even some words that should have been capitalized were left in common. I urge the author to fix these issues as many readers might find an issue with this. Grammar is essential when attracting readers. Story development: Neatly done. The main character seems humans despite being ranked #4. Not too egotistical and not too timid. Character Design: Not much said but It's a matter of preference whether you want to describe your characters in detail or not. Some readers like to imagine how the characters look for themselves so it goes either way. Overall: Not a bad book in any way. The story can be captivating and the author has talent. You just need a little more writing experience and to fix your grammatical errors then you're good to go. The book is far from unreadable, just needs some edits. Keep up the good work author!