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2022-02-25 04:33

Yes, don't waste your money. If the first two chapters are terrible so is the rest of it. I can't believe that it starts charging after two chapters. The first line wasn't eye catching either. I wanted to give it a chance and it's just mindless dribble. Needs a lot of work in the character and story development.

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