Review Detail of Zerosum89 in Maxed Out in Another World
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Shameless author review incoming. I just want to say that this book has been a lot of fun to write and believe It or not im making each chapter up as I go. So what happens next is a mystery to us all! I am doing my best to not be overly cliche and make my character unique. He will experience real human emotions at time and isnt a stone cold killer or a soft push over. He is a bunch of things at once. My goal is to build him and the characters around him over time as they face the world. I will accept any constructive criticisms, however if youre just being a d-bag you can kick rocks. Thanks everyone!
Maxed Out in Another World
Zerosum89
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I’m not really sure how accurate that would be. Its more of a HUD then a system. It doesn’t help him or give quests or anything else. I will add that as a disclaimer though.
Kamikaze_Eagle:doing a quick look at chapter 1 and I just gotta ask, can you add the system tag since it seems their will be a system. Some people don't like systems others love them, but you should just add the tag to give people a heads up.
yeah I noticed that after I read further. The system tag definitely isn't required. The mage attempting to analyze Mikax just made it seem like it would be a system.
Zerosum89:I’m not really sure how accurate that would be. Its more of a HUD then a system. It doesn’t help him or give quests or anything else. I will add that as a disclaimer though.
CrimsonBlack:can you tell me what kind of kingdom building goes on in the story
Zerosum89:Basically takes a town and rebuilds it into his own city state type situation so far…