Review Detail of Zero_619 in Magus of the Wizarding World
Review detail
When I started reading this story I had high hopes for it but it never came to be. The MC had a cheat which while cannot be classified as too OP or completely broken but had the potential to be very impressive if used correctly which to some extent he did. But the real bummer starts when he does not even realize that he is in marvel crossover which at this point is not even the real issue anymore. The sheer amount of effort the MC is putting to keep the canon timeline of HP world is not even funny. Not to mention that trying to influence in a stupid attempt to have some influence in wizengamot. The only time when he even tried to use the meta knowledge for his gain is when he broke into azkaban while using Harry's cloak of invisibility and telling Sirius that he borrowed from him while ti was actually stolen at that time which if cane to light will send him to azkaban without much of a trial as he is a muggleborn. Not to mention that it is a complete canon rehash just with the added character of MC.
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More like a one track mind where he keeps the canon intact to take advantage of it even when some things are not necessary. Ex. - He could save ginny by taking the horcrux and giving it to someone like malfoy or someone else but he let suffer when it was not really needed. Another is the revelation of Harry's parseltoungue which could be 'discivered' another way instead of just repeating the DADA club scene and isolating harry from the rest of the school in the process.
RuberDF:Oh far is this appening? Is he obsessed with keeping the plot for the entirety of the story until now?
Acuérdese que cuando intentas cambiar el destino pasan varias cosas como el destino te pone en su mira y te afecta o en este caso se lo hubiera dado a alguien más las cosas cambiarían completamente en el futuro por qué acuérdate que una comunidad mágica pequeña como lo es Harry Potter todos siempre están conectado y emparejados de algún modo creando así el efecto mariposa y cambiando toda la trama por completo
Zero_619:More like a one track mind where he keeps the canon intact to take advantage of it even when some things are not necessary. Ex. - He could save ginny by taking the horcrux and giving it to someone like malfoy or someone else but he let suffer when it was not really needed. Another is the revelation of Harry's parseltoungue which could be 'discivered' another way instead of just repeating the DADA club scene and isolating harry from the rest of the school in the process.