writing quality is great no issues in legibility or mistaking genders which for som reason happens ALOT on here story development is fine, exploring alot that most dont though its held back by 1 thing in particular character design...the epitome of 500 int 0 wis, a smart but frustratingly oblivious mc, good god the hair tearing updating stability very few if any issues world background...hes at 90+ chapters and still aint explored 99.999°% of the world, still doesn't realise it's marvel. frankly the marvel thing could be axed completely and it'd work alot better if you can suspend your rampaging disbelief at the lack of awareness iits good read, other than that. meh.
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