Decent Grammar but has xianxia vibes alot it also has a stupid mc at some points because SPOILER SKIP TO NEXT PARAGRAPH Even though hes read about history and has been with his parents he still doesn't know that hes in a marvel crossover and he makes stupid decisions sometimes like he tried to get a positive impression with Harry but he didnt do anything when he was bullied or anything just said see you soon he also shouldn't have even gotten involved if hes worried about being suspicious Other than that it has a few good ideas that are relatively new and doesn't make the mc have no friends even if the interactions are awkward
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