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pasito_tun_tun
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The story started well... the next chapters were confusing, meaningless, filler, plus MC doing stupid actions and stupid decisions ERRRR author has the wood of a writer, but the problem is his MC. MC has no ambition or greed to get to know the HP world and its beauties... MC is dumb and boring, he even has a system (the game), all his knowledge of the wizarding world is Hogwarts πŸ˜‘ MC live and die in school, without knowing other countries and magical towns.

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Magus of the Wizarding World

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Arrowinmyknee
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You clearly haven't read the story... The "System" is no Game, it's an AI like the one out of WMW. There are no Game Elements in the story. As for he just stayed in Hogwarts? It's only the second Year, he is a 12 Year old Student, he can't explore the World, that would be just unrealistic. And he will be visiting another Magical Country in his second year so also untrue. Read the Story before you Review!

Arrowinmyknee
ArrowinmykneeAuthorArrowinmyknee

As for no Ambition, literally in the first Chapter he decides he wants to reach the top of the World. Which is worked out more and more with every chapter.

Arrowinmyknee:You clearly haven't read the story... The "System" is no Game, it's an AI like the one out of WMW. There are no Game Elements in the story. As for he just stayed in Hogwarts? It's only the second Year, he is a 12 Year old Student, he can't explore the World, that would be just unrealistic. And he will be visiting another Magical Country in his second year so also untrue. Read the Story before you Review!
pasito_tun_tun
pasito_tun_tunLv4pasito_tun_tun

πŸ™„ errr that's the idea, but you don't make it easy to read.

Arrowinmyknee:You clearly haven't read the story... The "System" is no Game, it's an AI like the one out of WMW. There are no Game Elements in the story. As for he just stayed in Hogwarts? It's only the second Year, he is a 12 Year old Student, he can't explore the World, that would be just unrealistic. And he will be visiting another Magical Country in his second year so also untrue. Read the Story before you Review!
Arrowinmyknee
ArrowinmykneeAuthorArrowinmyknee

yeah sure... that's totally the reason. All the statements in your reviews are untrue. So I will delete them, you just review for the sake of giving bad reviews, you didn't read the Story.

pasito_tun_tun:πŸ™„ errr that's the idea, but you don't make it easy to read.