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2021-12-31 02:22

Alright, I was expecting some fun with this story, since its a marvel cross over and all that. However, this is one of the most boring and uninteresting stories you can read. Sure, if you enjoy training montages and lots of research, then this is just for you. But If you like character development and interactions between those characters look somewhere else. This story is a lot of time skips from one research project to the next with minimal plot progression. I can't tell you how boring it is to see him have a conversation with an AI in his head while they experiment on magic. The mc says he has friends, but they barely see eachother, and the written parts of him interacting with them is few and far between. What you get is the author will say that he spends the rest of his week with his friends while waiting for the AI to finish computing a project. You don't get any stories of how he spends time with his friends, or what they do, you just get a time skip. So freaking boring.

Magus of the Wizarding World

Arrowinmyknee
4.4
143 Chs

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HangerBaby
HangerBabyLv11

well i gave it a shot but i cant. the pov changes more times a chapter than i blink and the grammar is so bad one guy comments on almost every paragraph with ways to fix it. of course none of the mistakes have been fixed like most fics on this site the author seems to be to lazy to fix his mistakes. story wise while not the worst is still bad as there are no real driving factors for the mcs thirst for power other than "ive been reborn" character design is blaah. you know nothing about the mc but for some reason he wants to be the best with no explanation for why other than "i been reborn with a cheat mwhahaha" lame really updating is not bad world background you must have at least working knowledge of both harry potter and magus world otherwise you wont know whats going on to much as like i said the writing quality is terrible

3yr

Arrowinmyknee
ArrowinmykneeAuthor

I'm just following tradition here but 5 Stars. I'm just writting something I also would read. So in my humble opinion as an Author it's a good story. Hopefully all of you will enjoy it.

3yr
Predaotr
PredaotrLv5

Mildly interesting story so far, tho not great one. What I can't understand is how MC didn't realized he's in marvel already. Considering how captain America changed history and they should be learning about ww2 already even in Britain, and MC was going to muggle school and then continued studying, so how come he never came across any mention of captain America for example ?

3yr
Zero_619
Zero_619Lv5

Reveal spoiler

3yr
ImNex
ImNexLv2

Interesting story. MC is not reincarnated as the same year as harry potter. That's all I'm saying since we only have one chapter right now lol. I don't wanna spoil the whole chapter.

3yr
camel_powered49
camel_powered49Lv3

Reveal spoiler

3yr
Player0Kun
Player0KunLv4

MC is stupid. He has a supercomputer in his soul and he has to tink what did he do for such a big butterfly effect to occur and Hermione to die, to this i will say that you not only exposed Peter and helped black, he made Granger attend ravenclaw indted of griffendor. You made many decisions that are dumb and only give small time benifit, have tendency to jump into danger for power like azkaban, I mean you has a AI in your soul you should first store all knowledge of magic from room of requirment and create a spell to scan a book in a certain area then raid the books of science, phychology, art, economy or every single field you can get your hands on. Afterall main ability of AI supercomputer is not to tink out of the box solution but create a solution from its already present database. Just think about for a second if ai database was filed with all acknowledge he can find in mundane world, then he can ask his ai to create a programme to evaluate his decision making skills and all the decisions he had made or was going to make. He has most powerful support tool with him.

2yr
happy_sad
happy_sadLv13

Decent Grammar but has xianxia vibes alot it also has a stupid mc at some points because SPOILER SKIP TO NEXT PARAGRAPH Even though hes read about history and has been with his parents he still doesn't know that hes in a marvel crossover and he makes stupid decisions sometimes like he tried to get a positive impression with Harry but he didnt do anything when he was bullied or anything just said see you soon he also shouldn't have even gotten involved if hes worried about being suspicious Other than that it has a few good ideas that are relatively new and doesn't make the mc have no friends even if the interactions are awkward

3yr
Ashmodai
AshmodaiLv4

Nice story so far. And lots of potential. Keep up your good work. I am really interested where you will take the story later on. Good luck..

3yr
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