The story is great, as it is not following the original plot, it has a lot of suspense. I recommend it, and the only flaw would be in its grammar, but it is understandable, it corrects it when the error is found. The characters are well detailed, and the character is very good. If you have time read the story.

it's an OK novel but,the grammar ain't all that great, ,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

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Bro just one rquest put Harem tag 🏷 On it , as those who do not prefer harem will just skip , but the story is good harem or not you got me hooked up with the storY

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somewhat good idea but the grammar is not good ! ...... ................................................. .........................

Rin in harem ,Rin in harem Kay . Well other novel there was mc use space and time to go to past just to take rin into harem . Men who can't make that women into harem are beta mc to me ,cause he want harem? but cannot make them accept harem? that's was beta mc Alpha mc are simple , he say to girl he want harem if they not agree he left them hahahahah . There many women it's like fish in sea so no need to catch one women

This project is interesting to me. Minuses of the project : 1)The strength of the main character is not exactly shown .2)The plot is too different and little developed 3)Few characters, and the existing ones are little revealed