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I have read this harfy potter fan fiction and I must say that it is not bad (I have reached the last chapter: 7) ... But I have encountered a problem: the author does not manage to organize the continuity of the plot well (I think it will time, from what I know and the first fan-fiction so it goes quite 👍) ... (not that I can do better) then author continues like this.

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