Review Detail of Ultramar in The Midnight Jewels

hello there. All i can say is that the plot and by extension the story has a lot of potential, the characters interactions are nice and enjoyable. It’s also easy to follow the plot of the story from the get go allowing the story to have a good flow. If there was something I have to point out to be improved upon, it would be the structure of the phrases that sometimes can be out of place, though they do not distort the meaning nor is there much in terms of grammar mistakes. Over all it’s a nice read that I can recommend and I have no doubt that the author will get even better with more experience as they writs this story. Good luck to you in all you endeavor.