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Tangerqueen
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I'm sorta picky when it comes to stories, and honestly, I'm really pleasantly surprised with this novel. I just wanted to say that I really really am a fan of artistic book names, and yours was one of the best that I've come across on WN (that being said my aesthetics are very very diff from your target WN population so rip). I really enjoy how the confusion is evident when she wakes up, and the sort of twist about which reality is actually reality was refreshing. The FL isn't annoying or bratty and frankly rather likable. And I loveeee your way with words. Maybe it's just that it's hard to come across writing without grammatical errors here or stuff that isn't just pure dialogue and stream of conscious, but I felt like your prose stood out. Just as a side note though, I felt like a lot of sentences started with [Name] did this. [Name] did that. But that might also be me. Good luck with the story!!!

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Steal The Prince's Heart

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Thank you for the constructive feedback <3 I'll make sure to edit it accordingly such that it's a more pleasant read!