Review Detail of JJ_Prakoso in Yuangfen

Here are my thought about this novel based on what I read so far: World Building: For me the world-building is mostly fine especially one setting with Asian cultures such as chines, I guess. But I suggest the author give more description, detailed, or even the atmosphere for making the book more engaging to read. Character: They are all fine I guess and I do like the author give some showing. However, I do believe the author will give more development about their journey or even added more detailed about their appearance. Overall, that's all I have to say about this novel and thank you very much. Keep up the good work!!!